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Double Up by Vanessa North

Double Up

Double Up

by Vanessa North

Publisher: Riptide Publishing

Release: 25th August 2014

The blurb

Knowing he’s loved can make any man fly.

Fifteen years ago, Ben Warren was a wakeboarding champion: king of big air, ballsy tricks, and boned grabs. Until a career-ending injury left him broken in ways he still has no hope of fixing. Now he takes his thrills where he can get them, and tries not to let life hurt too much.

Then Davis Fox arrives in Ben’s sporting goods store with a plan to get in touch with his estranged brother by competing in the annual wakeboarding double-up contest. The catch? He’s never ridden before. It’s crazy, but Ben’s a sucker for the guy’s sob story—and for his dimples, too—so he agrees to coach Davis.

Davis is everything Ben isn’t: successful, confident, and in love with life. And he wants Ben to love life—and him—too. But before Ben can embrace a future with Davis, he needs to remember how to hope.

Our thoughts

Double Up is is a sweet, fast paced novella that is told in first person, present tense from Ben’s POV. The present tense narrative was my biggest problem with this story. When done well, present tense can really bring you into the action and eventually you forget about it and just immerse yourself in the story. Unfortunately, this wasn’t the case here. The writing felt clipped and it was constantly taking me out of the story, which sucked because it is a good story.

Ben is a retired wake-boarding champion whose career was cut short fifteen years ago when he injured his back during a competition. Now he runs a wakeboard shop and sometimes gives lessons. Ben is 40 years old, has pretty low self esteem, has some issues in his life he has to deal with and doesn’t do relationships.

When Davis walks into the shop, Ben is immediately attracted to the younger man but feels that Davis is out of his league.  Davis is a successful architect who’s looking for wake boarding lessons in order to connect with his younger brother. Ben agrees to the lessons which lead to flirting, dating and really hot sex. This is one place that the present tense worked. It really immersed you in the *ahem* action.

I really liked Ben. I liked his vulnerability and his willingness to open up to Davis and trust him. Davis, on the other hand, came off as a jerk. The reason for the fight screamed of emotional manipulation to me. Ben won’t do what Davis wants so he walks away. It wasn’t a simple thing for Ben, there were certain risks and circumstances that affected Ben’s decision but Davis wasn’t even willing to discuss them.

The ending might have been a little too quickly and perfectly wrapped up, especially since Davis seemed to come around out of nowhere. Still, the story was sweet and the sex hot, so I did enjoy it. If you can get past the present tense narrative, it’s a good way to spend a couple hours.

3 Stars

Otila

Reviewed by Otila

To find out more about Vanessa North and her books, visit her website.

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★★★★ High and Tight by Vanessa North ★★★★

 

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High and Tight

by

Vanessa North

The blurb…

Pilot Adam Walker has had one great love in his life: Harris Kingston. But twelve years ago, when he accepted a scholarship and joined the Navy, he chose duty to his country over love. Their on-again off-again relationship was never more than private joy, a frustrating fact of military life.

Harris never wanted to be anyone’s dirty little secret. When Don’t Ask, Don’t Tell was repealed two years ago, Adam broke his heart one last time. He’s picked up the pieces and moved on, building a great career and dating guys who aren’t afraid to be seen in public with him. But when Adam strolls into his salon asking for a haircut, his newfound happiness goes to hell in a handbasket.

Adam’s been at war with himself for over a decade. Now on the verge of leaving the military, he’s desperate to court Harris the right way and be forgiven. With two weeks’ leave and a Navy man’s conviction, he’s ready to start over…if he can convince Harris he’s ready to come out and commit

So what did Robyn think? 

This was a great little angst fest – just right for me. I love stories that have a hard fought HEA and these guys had to fight so hard to get it.

Adam is a Navy pilot that couldn’t come out but once DADT was repealed he still hid in his closet, too scared to step out. Harris waited and waited, expecting Adam to come for him as soon as DADT was abolished but Adam never showed up. Two years later and Adam returns wanting Harris back in his life for good this time.

“Don’t Ask, Don’t Tell ended two years ago. You would not have been dishonorably discharged.”

“I wasn’t ready, Harris. What do you want from me?”

“There was a time I’d have settled for anything. For a while, I wanted everything, and I really thought we were going to have it but you were too fucking scared. And now? Nothing. I want nothing from you.”

87 Kindle pages of emotional angst and some sweet loving moments.

“No, Adam. It’s always been you.” He looked and smiled. “And if you really fucking mean it, there is nothing in this world I want more than to be with you. All you ever had to do was ask me.”

4 stars

Hope you enjoy – Robyn x

Reviewed by RJ

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